martin 2014

X  I wish I can….. 

O  I wish I could…

                               試比較 wish 和 hope 的用法

X   I wasn’t make good use of my time.  

O   I wasn’t making good use of my time

X   It will help me become more healthier.   <形容詞比較級>的錯誤混用

O   ………………………..more healthy

     ………………………..healthier

Follow the steps and do its regular, it will be the best way to reach my resolution.

                    副詞…regularly, and…..兩個句子間的<連接詞>

If I don’t follow the steps, I will don’t know when to  助動詞的重複使用

I want to be a more effective (efficient) learner.   字義的誤解/用

   ----> effective (有效的/能達成目的) 通常和 communication/ medicine

  -----> efficient (效率高的)  efficient energy use/ fuel efficient cars

X  I had been wasted much time on things that are not important to my life, for example, watching TV, surfing the Net and so on.

  ---> I had been wasting so much time things that were not important to my life, such as watching           TV,surfing the net and so on.

X  Second, quitting the bad habits, like eating junk food, eating more meat than vegetables.

缺少主動詞

 ----> Second, I should quit the bad habits, like eating junk food, have an unhealthy appetite for meat than vegetables.

New Year is coming, I examined everything in the past year and I know I have a lot to improve.

----> A new year is coming, and after examining everything in the past year, I know I have a lot to improve. 

It will let you know when to do what.  

“you” 不適用於大學學測作文, 因為是大學教授改, 加上 you, 好像你在’教 導’改作文的教授如何做事

And I have to choose who can help me….莫在句子前放上連接詞 and